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blue undulations by =anomalucy:iconanomalucy:



i swim with sharks
   he sit and he watch
   as i undulate in blue below him

   the lights, the lights
   burn with heat so bright
   as he sit and he watch me float

   he make me feel so good
   he make the burn
   he take my turn
   he stroke the shark against the grain
©2006-2009 =anomalucy
:iconanomalucy:

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i just remembered something from a long time ago...it was small but substantial enough.

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:iconanomalucy:
thanks darling
no offense, but it's starting to get a little depressing that the only person who comments on my stuff is my sister...:(

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and there's too much going on
but it's calm under the waves
in the blue of my oblivion
:iconstrokedbc:
you know what? this is one of the better poems i've seen which toss unnesscessary grammar. it flows well, it uses imagry where it's needed but without feeling forced, and it reminds me of harry belafonte. so i'm going to favorite it.

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commitment is crushing the cap.
:iconanomalucy:
thank you:)

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and there's too much going on
but it's calm under the waves
in the blue of my oblivion

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